分析句子结构就可以发现错误所在。
时间状语:Having paid my taxes,(= after I have paid my taxes)
主语:the amount left in the bank
【主语核心名词】the amount
【分词短语充当的后置定语】left in the bank
谓语部分:is hardly worth mentioning.
分词状语的主动形式(此处是完成时)的逻辑主语应该是句子主语 the amount(指存款金额),但是 Having paid my taxes 等于 after I have paid my taxes,可见其逻辑主语是本句中的 my,说明作状语的分词短语与句子主语不一致,所以这个句子需要修改如下:
改为独立主格结构:I having paid my taxes, the amount left in the bank is hardly worth mentioning (I 是充当逻辑主语的独立主格)
改为过去分词:paid my taxes, the amount left in the bank is hardly worth mentioning(过去分词没有完成形式)
the amount left in the bank (银行里剩下的钱)是主句的主语,它和分词短语里的动词pay应该是被动关系,所以应该改成:Having been paid my taxes
这个改法也不对。paid taxes不是 the amount left in the bank.而是 I,
这里改用被动,应该以Taxes为对象,
My taxes being paid, the amount left in the bank is hardly worth mentioning.
the amount left in the bank (银行里剩下的钱)是主句的主语,它和分词短语里的动词pay应该是被动关系,所以应该改成:Having been paid my taxes,
主句两个谓语