谁能改一下这篇英语作文?英语写作

2025-04-01 05:05:40
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回答1:

1、climbing 改为 climb,时态形式与protect相同。
2、happened 改为 happens,保持整篇时态一致。
3、spot是可数名词,spot改为spots。
4、everyone 改为 nobody,你要表达的是,不是一个寻常的地方,没有人可以攀爬。
5、prohibiting emergence of the situation改为the emergency to prohibit this phenomenon
6、government 改为 the government
7、reinforce strongness of watching and make rule for 改为 reinforce to strength the supervision and management and make rules for