英语短文改错（高三）

Patience is of great importance in our daily life. Once I waited a bus to come at a stop. 30 minutes past, but no bus came. Both upset and annoyed, I decided to walk on feet. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught it. If I chose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I realize my problem. Being impatient will possible waste all the effort that we have put it in. Now whenever I am close to lose my patience, I’ll think of this experience. 

1. waited后面加for  句意：有一次我在等车来。Wait是不及物动词，waited后面加for

2.past改成 passed  句意：30分钟过去了。Past是介词，这句话缺少谓语动词： passed

3.feet.改成 foot   句意：我决定步行。On foot步行  

4.when 改成than  句意：我已离开公共汽车就到了。使用no sooner„. Than„，句型 

5.a 改成 the       句意：如果我选择等下一班车。特指the next bus 

6.other改成another句意：我还要再等30分钟。Another+数词+名词“另外„ 

7.do 改成did        时间状语是Only then用一般过去式：did  

8.possible 改成possibly句意：不耐烦可能浪费我们投入的所有的努力。修饰waste用副词possibly

9.去掉it         这是定语从句，that在定语从句中做宾语，去掉it  

10.lose改成losing  be close to doing几乎做„，lose改成losing