(1) this is ^ the (2) But 改为And (3) 去掉to (4)happily 改为happy (5)several 后加other((6) 去掉with(7) break 后加s ( 8)in 改为at (9)more 改为most.(10)an 改为 a 仅供参考哈!
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(1) This is(the) first time
(2)
(3)know (about)me
(4) happily-->happy
(5) several(other)
(6)in with--->within
(7)
(8) in home -->at home
(9) most
(10)an newspaperman --->a newspaperman